
Dedicated to my Husband and Daughter
It was early in the morning, and a young woman and her husband were driving to the train station. Temporarily, at least, the rain had stopped. The air was pleasantly fresh and clear, though oh! so cold, and here and there a patch of blue showed through the thick November clouds. Pale sunlight shone thinly against the grey morning dampness, brightening just a little the depressing aspect of the city.
“Oh look, a rainbow!” the young woman cried, pointing out the window.
Her husband, who was driving, looked up into the distant sky. Sure enough, half of a large rainbow emerged from a thick grey cloud.
The woman’s face beamed with happiness. “Isn’t that lovely?” she said. “It makes the whole morning beautiful.”
As they drove down the muddy narrow road which ran alongside the railroad tracks, the rainbow seemed to grow more distinct. Soon they could see each end of the rainbow, though the middle was still hidden by clouds.
“Now you can see both ends,” the woman cried eagerly.
“See where it goes,” her husband said. “Maybe I can find my pot of gold.”
The woman searched the sky, trying to determine beginning and end.
“It seems to stretch between the hills over there” — (she pointed left) — “and downtown over there” — (she pointed right.)
“Where does that story come from, anyways?” her husband asked.
“The Irish, I think. You know, leprechauns and the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.”
“Yeah,” said her husband, a greedy grin on his youthful face. “I’d like to find a pot of gold at the end of it.”
The young woman frowned. “Oh, Jim, that’s all you care about is money. Can’t you think of anything else?”
“Not when we don’t have any,” he answered.
The woman said nothing more, and they drove along in silence until they arrived at the station. But when Jim was helping her out of the car, she suddenly noticed the other rainbow.
“Now look,” she said triumphantly, pointing at the sky. “There are two rainbows!”
Above the first rainbow, which was growing brighter by the minute, half of a second rainbow could be seen.
“That’s unusual to see two rainbows,” she said thoughtfully. While the young couple watched together, the first rainbow grew stronger and more distinct as the sunlight shifted.
“Now you can see the whole arch!” the woman exclaimed. Truly, it was lovely. The rainbow colors stood clear and vivid against the somber grey sky. “That’s rare to see such a rainbow,” she said, grabbing her husband’s hand and squeezing it tightly. Indeed, the colors seemed almost unnatural.
“And remember, Sharon, there are two,” Jim reminded her gently. “Perhaps they’re man and wife — like us.”
Sharon giggled. “Which one is the man?” she asked playfully.
“The one on the bottom is the strongest.” Jim put his arm around his wife’s ample waist and hugged her close.
“On the bottom, right where he belongs,” Sharon teased.
Her husband laughed. “Actually, I rather like it when you’re on top.”
Sharon pounded him lightly in the stomach. “You’re incorrigible, you beast!”
The young man patted his wife’s swollen belly, feeling the unborn child move inside. “When rainbows make love, do they make little rainbows?” he whispered in her ear.
“How else could there be rainbows,” she whispered back.
“Actually, there are rainbows all the time. We just don’t see them.”
“My husband, the brilliant scientist!”
Suddenly the skies opened up, and a great rain began to fall. The wind whipped up, chilling them to the bone. Laughing wildly, the young couple ran onto the covered platform.
“I love rain like this!'” shouted the young woman over the roar of the downpour.
“I don’t like getting wet all the time,” shouted her husband, who was more practical. “Here comes the train!”
Down the track, the two bright headlights pierced the misty, watery veil of rain, and in a few moments, the train pulled into the station. The woman hugged her husband tightly and kissed him passionately on his warm lips. “You smell so good,” she murmured, snuggling close to his big, warm body.
“I have to go,” he said, disentangling himself from her clinging embrace. “Have a good day. Rest!”
“I will,” she promised, smiling. “Have a good day!”
She waited until he was safely on the train, waved good-bye, then ran into the rain. Behind her, the train began to move slowly down the track. She couldn’t help herself. She stopped and watched as the train gathered speed and chugged out of sight. She pulled her drenched jacket closer around her bulging body. Rain poured down her face and hair. In a moment, she heard the train whistle blasting farther down the track. “I love you,” she whispered, and a lump formed in her throat. Tears watered her eyes, spilled over, and ran down her cheeks, mingling with the rain. She turned and ran as fast as she could to the car.
She climbed into the car and turned the key. The engine sputtered, died, then caught again. She pulled out of the parking space and followed once more the primitive road which ran beside the railroad tracks. She was wet and cold and eager to get home to a hot shower. Her husband was gone to work, the babe was safe and warm inside her. The day would be long and lonely. The rain would carry on, darkening their small apartment. Still, she was happy and content. She had followed her rainbow long ago. She had found her pot of gold.
Happy St. Patrick’s Day!
Dawn Pisturino
November 1983
Copyright 1983-2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
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from the cut porcupine pie.
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Awww, what a beautiful story Dawn. Several years ago, my husband was traveling down the interstate and three, not one, not two, but three rainbows landed on the interstate. He said it was such a divine experience. It blew him away and blew me away as he was telling me the story. A sweet tribute to your family. 🌈🌈🌈
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Wow! Three rainbows! That would be magical. Thank you, Kym! Have a magical evening!
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And you too Dawn. It sent shivers through my body when he told me about his experience. Truly awesome. Hugs and smooches to ya my friend! 🥰😘🤗 And you too have a magical evening! 🌟🎆✨
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That’s a lovely story, Dawn. I need to write more about rainbows! 🙂 And Happy St Patrick’s Day to you too
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Thanks, Killian13! Lots of Green Beer to you, too! I look forward to seeing a rainbow story from you!
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Wow! A lovely storie, thank’s for share Dawn.
Have a wonderful week!
Elvira
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Thanks, Elvira! Same to you!
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You are welcome, Dawn.
Exactly the same! 😊
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Wonderful story. Loved it.
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Oh, thank you, Diana! I’m so glad!
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Ahhh, this is so sweet. 🥰 An enjoyable read, Dawn. 🌈🌦️
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Thank you, Michele! Have a great day.
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My pleasure. You too!
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Thanks for the beautiful uplifti 😃
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You are so welcome! Thank you!
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I meant uplift but fortunately seems you understood 🙂
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It’s wonderful to escape into a lovely story like this, Dawn.
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Thank you, Nancy, I really appreciate that! Have a blessed day!
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Ah, the glorious scent after rain. It is almost as thrilling as the rainbow!
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Beautiful story. Warmed my heart. Yesterday, my daughter and I talked about rainbows and wondered if they would be in heaven. She said she would really like to slide down one.
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That would be wonderful to slide down a rainbow in heaven! Thank you!
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Happy St. Patrick’s Day!
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Same to you, Carolyn!
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A really beautiful story. That rainbow and pot of gold are priceless. 🙂
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Thank you very much, Terveen!
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