Dawn Pisturino's Blog

My Writing Journey

Eleven-Word Story

on March 24, 2022
(Photo from Raiders of the Lost Ark,1981)

An eleven-word story that I wrote for an Underneath the Juniper Tree Writing Challenge, August 10, 2011:

“Hideously white and deformed, the face at the window slowly decomposed.”

Dawn Pisturino

March 24, 2022

Copyright 2011-2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.


18 responses to “Eleven-Word Story

  1. jgibson4thwall says:

    Impressive imagery considering the word limit, the picture definitely helps but I’d honestly probably imagine the exact same thing without it. Good job!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Timothy Price says:

    A prime example of a very short story.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. OMG A+!!!! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Whoa, that eleven-worder fits that image perfectly! Talk about a Nightmare on Elm Street!!! LOL 😱😬😧

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Jim W. says:

    That face 😳😳😳 scary…I think it’s a demon Nazi?

    Liked by 1 person

  6. oh wow.. descriptive but I had to scroll that picture fast itr was ssooo disturbing., yikes !

    Liked by 1 person

  7. You should win something for that one.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. balladeer says:

    Pretty gruesome!

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: