
[NOTE: I apologize for the confusion. I totally messed up this post when I originally wrote it. I accidentally published it when I was saving it for another day, then removed it. Then, when I restored it this morning, it popped up for June 1st instead of today. I was going to let it go, but it kept bugging me, so I re-did the post so I wouldn’t obsess over my mistake all day. That’s not OCD, right?]
by Dawn Pisturino
For my daughter, Ariel
Butterfly, Butterfly,
Dappled with red,
Night-time is coming,
Fly home to your bed!
The white moon is rising,
He hasn’t a care;
The bright stars are shining,
Reflecting him there.
Oh, Butterfly, Butterfly,
What shall you do?
If darkness enfolds you,
How will you get through?
Fly home on a moonbeam,
Guided by stars,
Or maybe such planets
As Venus and Mars?
Or, drifting along on a
Sweet summer breeze,
You’ll land where you want
And do as you please?
Float down on a flower,
The sweet nectar there,
Drawing you inward
And filling the air?
You’ll suck up your supper,
Then lay down to sleep,
Your wings folded neatly,
Their beauty to keep.
And when, in the morning,
You suddenly wake,
The sun will be rising,
A new day will break.
Then, Butterfly, Butterfly,
Fly away home!
Or follow your instincts
To wander and roam.
But come again – do! –
If you happen this way,
Night-time or daytime
Or any old day!
February 8, 1986
This poem was set to music by composer and film maker Barry Gremillion and recorded in October 2013 by Barry Gremillion and Ariel Pisturino. It was uploaded onto SoundCloud.
Thanks, Ariel and Barry!

Thanks for stopping by and visiting!
Dawn Pisturino
June 6, 2022
Copyright 1986-2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
Girl Dawn, I experienced the very same thing. OCD, yeah, I think it’s a little of that because I did the exact thing you did, I just didn’t admit it! LOL 😱😂😲 Love this poem, especially these lines:
You’ll suck up your supper,
Then lay down to sleep,
Your wings folded neatly,
Their beauty to keep.
And when, in the morning,
You suddenly wake,
The sun will be rising,
A new day will break.
Then, Butterfly, Butterfly,
Fly away home!
What a beautiful tribute my friend! So tender and loving I might add. 🥰🦋😘🦋🤩🦋🤗🦋🌞
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Thank you, Kym, for the positive feedback. I was feeling pretty foolish. Thank goodness for positive people like you in the world! Have a blessed day!
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Oh girl, you are sooooo welcome! That’s how I learn girlfriend, when I make a crazy faux pas that. I’m not judgin’ at all! LOL 😜 And I guarantee that isn’t the last time I will make ’em either! 😂😲🤣
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Wow! So beautiful poem! Butterflies are magical! Thank’s for share, Dawn!
So beautiful what you do with your daughter Ariel, so sweet. Have a lovely time full of blessings!
Elvira
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Thank you, Elvira!
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How aptly this is titled! I love the word flow and imagery in this transformative piece!
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Thank you so much, Jaya! I appreciate that very much.
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Hello, I have a Butterfly bush in my yard and I was just thinking the other day, I don’t see the Monarch butterflies on it like I did in the past years, kinda sad. Enjoy your post Dawn, best regards.
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Yes, I haven’t seen any butterflies this year, either. Our drought has worsened, and it’s affecting the birds, the bees, the butterflies, and the rest of the wildlife. Thank you for visiting, Eileen!
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Butterflies land and post where and when they please.
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Such a lovely poem, Dawn, and how special that it was put to music and sung by your daughter.
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Thank you, Nancy, it was a Christmas gift, which made it even more special.
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I missed any confusion. I am just happy to enjoy your poem. 🦋 I know what you mean about obsessing over an error. 🤦🏻♀️
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Thank you, Michele, for your kindness and kind words.
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You are welcome, Dawn. 🌞
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How absolutely beautiful! I love this poem, Dawn!
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Thank you, Jeff, that means a lot to me.
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You’re most welcome, Dawn. Always.
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I’m so glad this kept bugging you Dawn so we got the gift of your beautiful poem. I love it!
and yes, I relate to this:
“but it kept bugging me, so I re-did the post so I wouldn’t obsess over my mistake all day. That’s not OCD, right?]”
So happy you didn’t let it go!
💖💖🥰
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Thanks, Cindy! I appreciate that! Have a great day!
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Thanks for sharing!
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What a beautiful, lyrical poem, Dawn.!
Just like the “Sweet summer breeze”! ❤
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Oh, thank you, Harshi! I appreciate your kind words.
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Beautiful poem and no that’s not OCD at.
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Thank you!
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Read mine too motivational thaughts and poetry
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OCD?! Not!!! Determination?! Yes!!!!! Glad you stuck with the process, messy though it was, to give the world this beautiful pice of poetry. Butterfly is fitting for this piece. Cheers
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Thank you so much!
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