
I’m pleased and proud to announce that my poem, “Melissa and the Angels,” has been published today on Spillwords. I want to thank Dagmara K. and her wonderful staff for publishing it. I chose to use an unusual rhyming pattern and some words that are difficult to rhyme. It was these difficult words that shaped the story.
Melissa and the Angels
by Dawn Pisturino
Melissa, in a tattered dress,
Came slowly down the lane,
A wicker basket on her arm,
Fresh eggs and butter from the farm,
Her tresses in a tangled mess,
Barefoot, and limping with the pain. . .
Please visit Spillwords here http://www.spillwords.com/melissa-and-the-angels/ to read the rest of the poem. If you like it, please like it on both Spillwords (the little heart at the top of the post) and my blog. I can’t tell you how much I appreciate your visits and your support.
A big THANK YOU! from the bottom of my heart.
Dawn Pisturino
August 22, 2022
Copyright 2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
love this .. congratulations Dawn!
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Thank you, Cindy!
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You’re so welcome Dawn! ๐
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absolutely! ๐
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Excellent and congratulations on getting published .. again!! ๐ ๐
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome!! ๐ ๐
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Congratulations dawn!
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Thank you!
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Hearty congratulations, dear Dawn! What a fabulous poem! I loved it so much and especially the rhyme pattern. Excellent๐. Very proud of you. โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐๐๐๐น๐น๐น
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Thank you, Aparna!
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riding hood could. tho
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Very clever. Congratulations.
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Thank you, Mark!
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Congratulations Dawn! Lovely poem :))
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Thanks, Kirsten!
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Anytime! ๐
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What a wonderful poem, Dawn. Congratulations!
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Thank you, Nancy!
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Wow! Wow! Wow! Wonderful! So beautiful poem! I am so happy for you! Congratulations!
Bravo Dawn! Well done!
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Thank you so much, Elvira!
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Hi, is your poem already available on Amazon? If yes, pls send me the link or ASIN Number. I will publish is on my monthly book selection on WordPress. This is the August Selection:
https://nokbew.wordpress.com/2022/08/03/ten-books-on-amazon-august-2022/
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Awesome poem, Dawn! Congratulations!
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Thanks, Jeff!
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Delightful and wholesome poem, Dawn. ๐ป Congrats on your publication!
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Thanks, Michele!
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Congratulations Dawn!
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Thank you very much!
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Awww, how beautiful. Congratulations Dawn! ๐๐๐ฅฐ
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Thank you, Kym!
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My pleasure Dawn! ๐ค๐๐
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Congratulations! Wonderful poem!
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderful poem. Powerful intro stanza.
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Thank you so much, Lance!
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What a beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm! Congratulations, Dawn ๐๐
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Thank you so much!
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The poem is awesome. Many congratulations, Dawn ๐๐
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Thank you very much!
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Congratulations Dawn!
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Thank you!
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