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“Melissa and the Angels” on Spillwords

on August 22, 2022

I’m pleased and proud to announce that my poem, “Melissa and the Angels,” has been published today on Spillwords. I want to thank Dagmara K. and her wonderful staff for publishing it. I chose to use an unusual rhyming pattern and some words that are difficult to rhyme. It was these difficult words that shaped the story.

Melissa and the Angels

by Dawn Pisturino

Melissa, in a tattered dress,
Came slowly down the lane,
A wicker basket on her arm,
Fresh eggs and butter from the farm,
Her tresses in a tangled mess,
Barefoot, and limping with the pain. . .

Please visit Spillwords here http://www.spillwords.com/melissa-and-the-angels/ to read the rest of the poem. If you like it, please like it on both Spillwords (the little heart at the top of the post) and my blog. I can’t tell you how much I appreciate your visits and your support.

A big THANK YOU! from the bottom of my heart.

Dawn Pisturino

August 22, 2022

Copyright 2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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41 responses to ““Melissa and the Angels” on Spillwords

  1. love this .. congratulations Dawn!
    πŸ’–

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  2. Excellent and congratulations on getting published .. again!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  3. surabhirawat says:

    Congratulations dawn!

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  4. aparna12 says:

    Hearty congratulations, dear Dawn! What a fabulous poem! I loved it so much and especially the rhyme pattern. ExcellentπŸ‘. Very proud of you. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️😊😊😊🌹🌹🌹

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  5. utahan15 says:

    riding hood could. tho

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  6. markrenney2 says:

    Very clever. Congratulations.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Kirsten says:

    Congratulations Dawn! Lovely poem :))

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Nancy says:

    What a wonderful poem, Dawn. Congratulations!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. elvira797mx says:

    Wow! Wow! Wow! Wonderful! So beautiful poem! I am so happy for you! Congratulations!
    Bravo Dawn! Well done!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. nokbew says:

    Hi, is your poem already available on Amazon? If yes, pls send me the link or ASIN Number. I will publish is on my monthly book selection on WordPress. This is the August Selection:

    https://nokbew.wordpress.com/2022/08/03/ten-books-on-amazon-august-2022/

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  11. Jeff Flesch says:

    Awesome poem, Dawn! Congratulations!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Michele Lee says:

    Delightful and wholesome poem, Dawn. 🌻 Congrats on your publication!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Belladonna says:

    Congratulations Dawn!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Awww, how beautiful. Congratulations Dawn! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–πŸ₯°

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  15. markbierman says:

    Congratulations! Wonderful poem!

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Lance Dean says:

    Wonderful poem. Powerful intro stanza.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. KK says:

    What a beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm! Congratulations, Dawn πŸŽ‰πŸ’

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  18. KK says:

    The poem is awesome. Many congratulations, Dawn πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Angela says:

    Congratulations Dawn!

    Liked by 2 people

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