
It was strange
The way the candle light
Seemed to bounce across the ceiling,
In leaps and bounds,
Like a playful poltergeist
Putting on a show.
In the background,
Where we sat,
The eerie black shadows
Seemed to lie in wait,
Like a big black cat,
Ready to pounce
At any moment
On the poor elusive spirit.
We waited anxiously on the sofa,
A silent audience,
And watched the cat and ghost
Game before us.
The cat lay still before the dancing ghost,
Licked its lips as it watched its prey
Dance closer and closer to Death,
Raised its haunches, flicked its tail,
And with one subtle gust of breath,
Pounced suddenly and completely
Atop the overconfident ghost,
Extinguishing it forever.
We smiled, then closed our lips, drew close,
And pressed them hard together
Beneath the warm black darkness
Which covered us, like a blanket.
Alone at last, we sniffed
The lingering odor of scented wax
And began a new game, called love.
1980
Dawn Pisturino
October 12, 2022
Copyright 1980-2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
Wow! This is such a lovely poem, dear Dawn. I love it. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Thank you so much, dear Aparna!
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Loved the poem!
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Thanks, Diana!
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Wonderfully creative poetry & perfect for the season, Dawn ~ thanks for sharing! ✍🏼👻🎃🍂🍁
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Thanks, Phil!
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scented candle wafting upon a mantle
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Wonderful writing, Dawn. Love the ending! 💞 The beginning made me think of Plato’s “Cave.”
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Thanks, Michele!
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Wonderful imagery, Dawn! Love it ❤️
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Thank you, Kaushal, you’re so kind! Have a blessed day, my friend!
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Such beautiful Imagery for the season Dawn 💗
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Thank you, Cindy!
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That’s so lovely!
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Thanks, Jeff!
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Very special Dawn. Spooky and at the same time, sweet.
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Thanks!
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You painted a beautiful picture, really well done!
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Thank you very much!
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Great poem! Only thing I would probably add is a picture or two just to give the body more meaning. Other than that, it’s great!
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Thanks for the feedback!
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