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I’m pleased and honored to announce that my poem, The Girl on the Bus, has been published today on Spillwords. I want to thank Dagmara K. and the staff at Spillwords for publishing it. Please visit Spillwords and show them your support. Thanks!
The Girl on the Bus
by Dawn Pisturino
The bus driver watched you in the mirror,
His eyes wide with fear,
When you stood up in the middle of the bus,
Crying like a terrified child.
Passengers waited with bated breath,
Wondering what you would do.
The sharpness of your pain . . .
Please visit Spillwords here to read the rest. Thank you so much!
Have a beautiful day!
Dawn Pisturino
November 17, 2022
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This is such a heart touching, beautiful poem, dear Dawn. Your poems are very lovely and it’s a great pleasure to read them. ♥️♥️♥️♥️😊😊😊
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Thank you, dear Aparna, I appreciate your feedback so much!
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Congratulations Dawn!
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Thank you so much, Ingrid!
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Congratulations, Dawn.
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Thank you, Timothy!
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Beautiful Dawn. Congratulations 👏👏👏
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This was in the spam so I didn’t see it. I always forget to check there. Thank you so much, Gabriela!
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My pleasure hon. Yes, lately WP loves to send me to spam folders 😊
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Sometimes that is all we need. Someone to say “it will be all right” with authenticity and care!
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I agree wholeheartedly! Thank you!
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Another published! Many congratulations to you!!
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Thank you!
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You are very welcome! 🙂
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Excellent write, Dawn. Loved it! Congratulations! 😊
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Thank you, Kirsten!
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You’re most welcome! 🌸
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you, Diana!
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it was full
and had to pull
away
the sign
was run over and knocked down
and is now shown by a red cone
shown
how sad
after the money they ve had
bus stop!~
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Thank you, John!
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WOW Dawn, what a touching and heart wrenching, yet excellent poem my friend. 🤗💖🥰 CONGRATULATIONS on your publication. Well deserved. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you so much, Kym!
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Oh girlfriend, it is indeed my pleasure. You did an amazing job on that poem Dawn! 🤗💖😍
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You’re having a wonderful writing week! Bravo, Dawn! 👏🏻
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Thank you, Michele!
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Congratulations to you Dawn!
Nicely done!! ❣️
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Thank you, Cindy!
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Congratulations Dawn! You’ve captured the love of a stranger so well in this poem! Well done!
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Thank you so much, Harshi!
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Such a moving poem, Dawn. Congratulations, and welcome to Spillwords 😉
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Thank you, Patricia!
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Congratulations! This is such a touching post.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome🤍💖🤍
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