
I want to thank Terveen Gill for publishing my story, You Can Have Her, today on Masticadores India. Terveen is very supportive of writers, and I encourage you to submit your poems and stories to her. Please visit Masticadores India to read the whole story.
You Can have Her
by Dawn Pisturino
The call came in on his office landline.
“Tony Blackwell? We want two million dollars in small bills, or your wife eats a bullet.”
Tony laughed. “She’s a whore. I don’t give a damn about her. Do you know how many times she’s cheated on me?”
“Hey, man, I’m sorry, but she’s still your wife. You must have some feelings for her.”
“Not at all,” Tony scoffed, and hung up the phone.
A few minutes later, the phone rang again.
“Mr. Blackwell, I repeat: we want two million dollars in small bills, or your wife dies. And don’t even think about calling the police.”
“Why would I call the police? I told you, I don’t care about the bitch.”
The voice on the other end became more insistent. “We’re not playing around, Tony. You either agree to fork over the money,
or your wife dies. I don’t care how many men she’s screwed.”
I would be humbled and pleased if you would visit Masticadores India to read the rest. If you like it, please hit the “Like” button.
Thank you so much!
Dawn Pisturino
December 1, 2022
Copyright 2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
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Fantastic, dear Dawn. I loved reading the story. It’s amazing. ♥️♥️♥️😊😊😊.
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Thank you so much, Aparna!
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Really enjoyed it Dawn! And a great post on Masticadores by a brilliant writer!
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Thank you, Francisco, you are too kind. But I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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If I get a laptop today I’ll check it out babe…. 🤦🐿️🐿️🐿️💝
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Always a pleasure Dawn.
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Congrats Dawn on the publication of your story! Will go over to read the rest.
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Thank you so much!
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Thanks for sharing!
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WHOA, this was certainly one of those “I didn’t see that one coming” kind of plots. Congratulations my friend on your publication. Oh the exposure you’re getting Dawn! Love it!!! 🤩💖😘💐🤗
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Thanks, Kym! Have a blessed day!
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You’re very welcome Dawn. Peace and blessings my friend. 🥰🙏🏽😍
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Congratulations.
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Thank you!
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love her madly
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This is an interesting change of pace compared to your other writings!
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I like variety! Thanks for your comment!
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Awesome write, Dawn! Congratulations!
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Thanks, Jeff!
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Oh well damn!!!!!! This was goo, had me drawn in from the start!
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Thank you so much!
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