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“You Can Have Her” on Masticadores India

on December 1, 2022

I want to thank Terveen Gill for publishing my story, You Can Have Her, today on Masticadores India. Terveen is very supportive of writers, and I encourage you to submit your poems and stories to her. Please visit Masticadores India to read the whole story.

You Can have Her

by Dawn Pisturino

The call came in on his office landline.

       “Tony Blackwell?  We want two million dollars in small bills, or your wife eats a bullet.”

       Tony laughed.  “She’s a whore.  I don’t give a damn about her.  Do you know how many times she’s cheated on me?”

       “Hey, man, I’m sorry, but she’s still your wife.  You must have some feelings for her.”

       “Not at all,” Tony scoffed, and hung up the phone.

       A few minutes later, the phone rang again.

       “Mr. Blackwell, I repeat: we want two million dollars in small bills, or your wife dies.  And don’t even think about calling the police.”

       “Why would I call the police?  I told you, I don’t care about the bitch.”

       The voice on the other end became more insistent.  “We’re not playing around, Tony.  You either agree to fork over the money,

or your wife dies.  I don’t care how many men she’s screwed.”

I would be humbled and pleased if you would visit Masticadores India to read the rest. If you like it, please hit the “Like” button.

Thank you so much!

Dawn Pisturino

December 1, 2022

Copyright 2022 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.


25 responses to ““You Can Have Her” on Masticadores India

  1. aparna12 says:

    Fantastic, dear Dawn. I loved reading the story. It’s amazing. ♥️♥️♥️😊😊😊.

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  2. Really enjoyed it Dawn! And a great post on Masticadores by a brilliant writer!

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  3. If I get a laptop today I’ll check it out babe…. 🤦🐿️🐿️🐿️💝

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  4. Always a pleasure Dawn.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Congrats Dawn on the publication of your story! Will go over to read the rest.

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  8. WHOA, this was certainly one of those “I didn’t see that one coming” kind of plots. Congratulations my friend on your publication. Oh the exposure you’re getting Dawn! Love it!!! 🤩💖😘💐🤗

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  9. markrenney2 says:

    Congratulations.

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  10. balladeer says:

    This is an interesting change of pace compared to your other writings!

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  11. Jeff Flesch says:

    Awesome write, Dawn! Congratulations!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Belladonna says:

    Oh well damn!!!!!! This was goo, had me drawn in from the start!

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