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The Listener
by Dawn Pisturino
As a small child,
I lay in my small bed,
Listening to the mourning doves
Crying softly, “Coo-hoo! Coo-hoo!”
From the woods across the road
In the early morning light.
At night, the owls called to me –
“Who’s there? Who’s there?” –
A comforting lullaby that
Quieted my childish fears
And lulled me fast to sleep.
The thunder spoke to me
When the rain called my name,
Throwing his fierce lightning bolts
Across the black, menacing sky.
And when the storm passed away,
A hungry mosquito berated me,
Demanding a bloody feast.
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The world is not a silent place.
Nor a place of peace.
~
As I grew,
The sounds of life grew louder:
Crashing metal when a truck turned over on the icy road.
My mother screaming,
My father shouting,
Then silence . . . when the unknown driver breathed no more.
~
Published in Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology (2023), available on Amazon.com.
Dawn Pisturino
February 1, 2023
Copyright 2023 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
Co-Author, #1 Amazon Bestseller, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology (2023)
Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine (2022)
Co-Author, #1 Amazon Bestseller, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women (2022)
Wonderful!
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Thanks, Timothy!
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awesome job
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Thank you!
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A great poem Dawn. I was thrilled to publish it 🙏
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Thank you, Gabriela, I appreciate your kind words!
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My pleasure hon. I love your poetry ❤️
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I can’t tell you how much I appreciate that!
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❤️❤️❤️
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Intense… 💜
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Thanks, Paula!
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Growing up was probably the worst thing we did to ourselves.
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Wow, what a shocking ending!
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behind those grape vines
i was safe and fine
at least in my four year old mind
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Very nice, John, thanks!
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This brought up some early fond memories! Thank you.
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You’re welcome!
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An absolutely fantastic write, Dawn! Brilliant!
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Thank you, I appreciate that!
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Sobering and beautifully written.
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Thank you very much!
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A gripping poem! Loved it!
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Thank you, Barbara!
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A wonderfully moving poem.
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Thanks, Nancy!
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Oh Dawn, how deep the telltale signs of childhood fears could make our imagination quite vivid and can cause us curl into a fetal position, shivering from what we think things could become. I love your flow of childhood memories and the emotion of sadness that frantically comes from silence. You painted a vivid picture in your contribution to this anthology and you did it so well girlfriend. Proud of you! 🥰💖🤗💕😘
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Thank you, Kym, that accident happened right in front of our house, and I still remember the somber look on my father’s face. It’s something that has stayed with me my whole life. It’s funny the things that we remember.
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Oh my gosh Dawn, how traumatic. I can’t imagine how horrifying that image was. Thank you for sharing such an intimate part of your childhood with us. Oh girl, the things we live through and the stories we can tell. Bless you Dawn my friend. 🥰🙏🏼🤗
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Thank you, dear Kym, have a blessed weekend!
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You are so very welcome Dawn. You too have a blessed and amazing weekend my friend. 🤗🥂🥰
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Frightening. It captures growing up and realising that the world isn’t an innocent, peaceful place really well.
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful. Very evocative and rich.
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Thank you, Russ!
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oh the tender and the terrifying both commanding and capturing. nicely composed❣️ Dawn!
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Thanks, Cindy!
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💗💗
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Excellent piece Dawn.
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Thank you very much!
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My pleasure Dawn.
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That is a real eye-moistener! Really great!
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Thank you so much!
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Wow! Amazing poem, Dawn!
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Thanks, Jeff!
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a poem, so true to life
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Thank you, Michael!
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Oh wow! Such a deep poem
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Beautiful and somewhat melancholy…💜
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Thank you!
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My pleasure, Dawn. 🙂
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Something magical about those peaceful night sounds. Well written, Dawn.
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Thank you, Mark!
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Lovely poem, Dawn! I especially liked how the sounds in the poem progressed as the speaker grew older. ❤
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Thank you, Cheryl!
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Oh I loved this and I too totally relate to the doves in the morning and the owls at night. It makes me feel that childhood innocence to remember the sounds of my first years. I really feel this poem because this child lived it too…Really enjoyed your memories, Dawn!
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I’m glad we shared the same memories! Thank you!
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Lovely! Mind checking out my blog? 😌🙏🏾
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