
(Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash)
I HATE SNAKES
by Dawn Pisturino
Don’t go into the swamp!
But we ignored them,
For we were great explorers,
Hunting for lost civilizations
And buried treasure
In the deepest jungles of Africa.
We plowed through the snake grass,
Climbed over rotting tree trunks,
Hung from wild grape vines,
Chattering like monkeys.
And we never considered the dangers
Lurking in our “jungle.”
The old summerhouse lay hidden
Among tangled green bushes
And thorn-studded berry brambles,
Overlooking the banks of the St. Joseph River.
I pushed open the creaky door to look inside
And froze in shock at what I saw:
Slithering, crawling, scaly snakes
Formed a moving carpet on the floor,
Entwining in an intimate embrace,
Lying together in a clump of shimmering bodies,
Moving slowly and surely in the rotten shadows.
We beat a hasty retreat
And never visited our “jungle” again.
And that’s why, even today,
I HATE SNAKES!
Published in Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology (2023), available on Amazon.com.
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Dawn Pisturino
February 6, 2023
Copyright 2023 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
Co-Author, #1 Amazon Bestseller, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology (2023)
Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine (2022)
Co-Author, #1 Amazon Bestseller, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women (2022)
Nice poem. I love snakes.
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I am on the same page, I hate snakes!
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Thanks, Francisco!
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You’re very welcome Dawn! And I must say, your poems in the anthology were fab!
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Thank you! I appreciate that! I haven’t had time to read any of it yet.
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Always a pleasure Dswn.
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Great imagery.
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Thank you!
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I too hate snakes. I hate all the creepy- crawlies!!!!!
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Love this poem! Especially the moving carpet part. Aah! Haha, great write, Dawn. 🙂
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Thanks, Kirsten! That’s the sort of stuff that gives me nightmares.
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You’re most welcome! 💕
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That’s certainly a frightening sight beautifully and poetically expressed
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Thanks, Thomas!
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So graphically realistic.
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Thank you very much!
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Wonderfully penned poem, dear Dawn! 🤗 And, I agree ~ snakes are for the birds!
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Thanks, Phil!
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You took me right there beside you.
Thanks?
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LOL! Believe me, remembering it gave me the shivers.
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coiled there down in the soil
fang and rattle
like eve and mary do battle
with the epitome of evil
reptile and repulsive too!
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Absolutely! Thank you, John!
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I’m with you, I wasn’t even sure I wanted to open the post for fear of what I’d find.
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LOL! I’m with you on that!
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Snakes are not my favorite thing!
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Oh yes, those glorious childhood memories; there were no snakes but plenty of toads. But I do like snakes, especially those carpet snakes (boas) habituating usually in the roofspaces of countryside houses, keeping rats and poisoned snakes under control.
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I hate snakes too. Thank you for your wonderful contribution hon.
xoxo
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Thank you! Get well soon!
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My pleasure hon. I will.
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I can completely relate! How terrified I am of the slithering creatures.
Very well written.
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Thank you!
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Every post you write is just a unique experience. Great work.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate that feedback!
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“Snakes. Why’d it have to be snakes?”
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Yes, I can really empathize with Indiana Jones!
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Congratulations on your inclusion in this fabulous collection of nostalgic poetry! I so love the moment this poem encompasses and the reason it imparts for a lasting distaste of snakes. ❤
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Thank you, Layla! Glad to see you in there, too!
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Oh I wouldn’t like them either so thanks for protecting us. Great story Dawn. I’m more of the snakes in our world. Great poem!!! 🙌🏽
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Thank you, Cindy!
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You’re so Welcome Dawn!
❤️
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Great poem! I share your feelings on the subject of snakes.
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Thank you very much!
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I’m not a fan of snakes either. A moving carpet of them? Yikes!
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Definitely the staff that nightmares are made of!
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haha lovely! 😂
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Thank you very much!
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Excellent poem, Dawn!
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Thanks, Jeff!
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You’re welcome, Dawn!
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Thanks for sharing!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much!
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Well done, Dawn. Loved it.
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Thanks!
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