I’m pleased to announce that my short story, “Trapped in the Snow,” has been published today on Gobblers & Masticadores. Thank you, J. RE Crivello and Manuela Timofte, for publishing it! Please visit Gobblers & Masticadores and show them your support. And if you like my story, please remember to like it. Thanks!
Delaware Territory, Colonial America, 1755
Nunganey trudged through the crusty snow searching for signs of beaver and other game. He longed for a blazing fire and his mother’s warm smile. But the villagers were counting on the hunters—the best of the tribe—to bring back fresh meat.
“Turn back!” shouted his father over the rising wind as a shower of white flakes fluttered down from the sky.
Nunganey’s heart dropped with disappointment. There would be no fresh meat. His younger brothers and sisters would cry with disappointment when their mother served hot watery broth, brewed from old bones, and meager portions of mashed acorns for dinner. His own hunger raged inside of him, and he longed for a piece of fat beaver cooked over a hot fire.
Suddenly, one of the hunters shouted, “Raccoon tracks!”
Nunganey’s father pointed at an old tree with a large hole in the…
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Wow. This is a lovely, heart touching story. ❤❤❤😊😊😊
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Thank you, Aparna!
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Beautiful story!
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Thank you!
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Congratulations, Dawn.
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Thanks, Timothy!
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Well done Dawn.
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Thanks for reading it!
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So well-told Dawn, I felt the cold in my bones. Congratulations on your publication!!
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Thank you, Karima, thanks for reading it!
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Congratulations! 🎉
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Thanks!
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love your vivid imagery Dawn.. truly captivating.
Congratulations! 💞
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Thanks, Cindy!
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❤️💕❤️
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congratulations.
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Thanks, John!
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Wonderful story! Great work! Thank’s for share, Dawn.
Happy Sunday!
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Thank you, Elvira!
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Congratulations Dawn! 👏🏼🥂👏🏼 Poor Nunganey had a challenging time, but remembering what his grandfather said to him and for being patient, he won and his win benefitted all. Beautiful, beautiful story Dawn. 🥰💖😘
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Thank you, dear Kym!
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Oh my friend, you are so very welcome. Thanks so much for sharing your awesome creativity! 🤗🥂😍🦋😊
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Congratulation, Dawn. Great story!
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Thank you!
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You’re most welcome!
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You are more than welcome, Dawn!
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Thank you, Manuela!
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What a gripping short tale. Bliss.
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Thank you!
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Congratulations! Loving this crisp and vivid short story. 🙂
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Thank you, Layla!
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Thanks for sharing!
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Interesting start here. I do not [you likely have noticed] exploit links to sites other than those original to those I follow [by weekly lookup or by WP reader]. “Others” like Gobb&Mast. G&M in particular I have a dislike for. I know I’m likely missing some good stuff, some great talent, but there is some axe-grinding here. Please forgive.
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Congratulations, Dawn! I enjoyed this compelling story with vivid imagery.
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Thank you so much, I appreciate the feedback!
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A beautiful, gripping tale with the emotional element being just right!
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Thank you so much, Harshi!
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Nice Great Story 👍
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Thank you!
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Thanks for sharing!
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Lovely. Enjoyed reading your story. Xoxo
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Thanks so much, Selma!
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