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I want to thank Barbara Harris Leonhard and her staff for publishing my poem, Just Me and the Clock, today on Masticadores USA. I hope you will visit them and show them your support. Thank you!
Just Me and the Clock
by Dawn Pisturino
Long hours of night creep slowly by.
Tick. . . Tick. . . Tick. . . Tick. . .
The clock clangs one.
I am utterly alone.
Just me and the clock.
Tock. . . Tock. . . Tock. . . Tock. . .
Please read the rest of my poem here.
Enjoy!
Thank you!
Dawn Pisturino
March 21, 2023
Copyright 2023 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.
I resonate with wanting to throw it at the wall….along with my computer some days!
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LOL! Thanks!
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Nice. Congratulations.
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Thanks, Timothy!
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Lovely and well done verses Dawn! Loved it and I will read the rest in MasticadoresUSA!
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Thanks, Francisco!
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My pleasure Dawn! ⚘️
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Indeed, ‘time flies’ under a variety of circumstances, a flight well-captured in your wonderful poetic quest for peace and silence. Thank you for sharing your creative talents, dear Dawn & Congratulations on having your work published at Masticadores USA! 👍 You rock, my friend. ✍🏼⏳🌞
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Thank you so much, Phil!
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Girl Dawn, I know how that is, especially when you have trouble falling asleep! I think all of us can relate to that experience at some point. Congrats on your publication my friend. Keep doing what you do! 🥰👏🏼⏰😊⌚💖🤗
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Thanks, Kym!
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Oh sweetie, it’s my pleasure indeed! You are so very welcome! 🥳💐🌞
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Loved it
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Thank you!
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tick tock
unlock
the steeple clock
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Love this girl!!!!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome!
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Congratulations on this publication, Dawn! I so love the sense of time and that repetitive ticking of the clock that climaxes in powerful action. ❤
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Thank you, Layla!
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Wow! Love it!
Thank’s for share Dawn.
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Thank you, Elvira!
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Always a pleasure, Dawn!
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That’s very good!
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Thank you!
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The dictate of mechanised time, it started the industrial revolution; how often have we mused about how to turn the ‘clock’ back?
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Dawn, yay. Congrats. I read. How brilliant. Time ticking is vexing. Your thoughts found a home in me. Thanks for sharing them. Xoxo
I just wrote a pantoum and talked about the clock too. 😉 we feel it, I know. It made a good topic for my pantoum…
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I read that! It was beautiful, Selma.
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Excellent write, Dawn. Congratulations!
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Thank you, Jeff, as always!
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Wow Dawn! You are such an amazing writer!! Can’t wait to hear more!
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your feedback!
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Lovely verses, Dawn! Congratulations 🎉
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Thank you, KK!
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