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A BIG Thank You!

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I want to express my sincere thanks to everyone who has supported my writing journey, followed my blog, bought and read my first poetry book, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023, helped me with the book launch, promoted it, re-blogged my posts, written reviews, conducted interviews, provided promotional photos, offered self-publishing and marketing advice, shared their experiences, and wished me well along the way.

An author cannot do it alone!

Hugs and kisses to you all!

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

May 17, 2024

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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“Petals of Haiku” Acceptance

(Cover art by Hikari)

I’m pleased to announce that several of my haiku have been accepted for Petals of Haiku: An Anthology, edited by Gabriela Marie Milton and published by Literary Revelations Publishing House. The release is scheduled for May 30th. Gabriela’s books are always works of art, as evidenced by the cover, which was created from artwork painted by the Japanese artist, Hikari.

Petals of Haiku – Foreword


“Literary Revelations invites you to immerse yourself in the captivating world of “Petals of Haiku: An Anthology.” This superb collection features the work of over 160 talented poets, each contributing four exquisite haiku, in just a few cases only three.

Petals of Haiku is not just an anthology that Literary Revelations is proud to publish. It’s a masterpiece that encapsulates the essence of haiku poetry. The spectacular haiku writers featured in this collection bring to life the delicacy of seasons and the profound range of human emotions, from joy to grief, in a way that is both delightful and deeply moving.

“Haiku, the beloved Japanese poetic form, has the power to distill life’s fleeting moments into magical verses. Within the pages of “Petals of Haiku,” you’ll discover both traditional and nontraditional interpretations of this timeless art, each one a masterful display of precision and emotion.

“This anthology is a true feast for the senses, inviting you to pause, reflect, and savor the simple elegance of these poetic gems. Whether you’re a seasoned haiku enthusiast or new to the genre, “Petals of Haiku” will leave an indelible mark, inspiring you to see the world through fresh, enlightened eyes.

“We would be truly honored if you would immerse yourself in this captivating collection. Prepare to be transported, moved, and transformed by the “Petals of Haiku.”

“The art on the cover is done by the award-winning painter Hikari who sets the tone for what awaits inside – a world where words dance off the page and into your heart. The background photo belongs to award-winning Japanese photographer Naoki Kimura and adds another layer of beauty to this already exquisite collection; and the beautiful cover is designed by Iuliana Irimia, a wonderful Montreal artist.”

Gabriela Marie Milton,
Editor, Author, Publisher

Website: Literary Revelations Publishing House


Have a great day!

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

May 16, 2024

Copyright 2024 Gabriela Marie Milton. All Rights Reserved.

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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Poetry Book Review: The Minotaur Dreams of Ariadne

The Minotaur Dreams of Ariadne by David Milligan-Croft (2024). Available on Amazon Kindle at https://a.co/d/3XuCjrQ.

When David released his latest haiku Ebook, I was captivated by the title and cover art and felt compelled to read it. He’s a prolific writer whose poetry I’ve savored before on WordPress, so I knew I wouldn’t be disappointed.

Each haiku contains golden nuggets of beauty and wisdom that stimulated my imagination and played on my sensibilities. For instance, while most people dream of heaven as a shining city with streets paved with gold, David envisions a paradise lined with cherry trees—and it works! Paradise could easily be found beneath the blossoms of cherry trees.

“The avenues of

Heaven, are surely lined, with

Cherry blossom trees”

~

Indulge yourself in the exquisite imagery of this little gem:

“A rose petal falls

Beneath an August sunset,

Like a velvet tear”

He perfectly captures an ordinary sunset’s beauty, color, texture, and sadness in a few carefully chosen words. If you’re a haiku fanatic, this engaging collection is a must-read.

Website: Thereisnocavalry

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

May 15, 2024

Copyright 2024 David Milligan-Croft. All Rights Reserved.

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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Poetry Book Review: “Poetry Treasures 4”

Poetry Treasures 4: In Touch with Nature, compiled and edited by Kaye Lynne Booth and Robbie Cheadle (2024). Available on Amazon at https://a.co/d/0EzhQMV.

The poems in this collection are exquisite and unique, written by accomplished poets known to the WordPress community. “Nature” is the theme, and WordCrafter Press released the book in time for the global celebration of Earth Day. Twelve poets contributed to the anthology. Click on the names to visit their blog or website. This is a long review, but I felt I needed to do justice to each poet.

Andrew McDowell

I was attracted to Andrew’s poem, “The Owl’s Hunt,” because it beautifully describes the owl that hoots in my neighbor’s eucalyptus tree every night.

“Only when the nightfall holds sway will the owl pursue its prey.

Waiting patient upon that bough, gazing out to all down below.

Blackness is no match for the eyes of a bird said to be wise.

He shall stay hidden in the night until he knows the time is right.

       Patiently the owl shall hunt. . .”

~

Robbie Cheadle

Robbie’s delightful use of imagery stirred my imagination in “Autumn Stage:”

“Autumn cosmos

Transforms the local park

Into a richly decorated stage

The floor artfully draped

With a Persian carpet

In shades of yellow and green. . .”

~

Patricia Furstenberg

The words and images are so skillfully woven together in “Lost in the Moors” that a sense of peace and serenity overcame me, and I was ready for a good night’s sleep.

“On lavender sky the sun sets low,

The wind whispers, he stirs none;

Hush, he murmurs, to dream-land you go.

***

“On a cetacean sky when the moon is silver

An owl hoots no-one, no-ot a fiddler,

Tic-toc, chimes the clock, dreams are no danger. . .”

~

Marcia Meara

In “Star-Gazing,” Marcia lovingly describes a father and son gazing at the stars while camping.

“The Perseids. . .

Lying back under

The ink-blotted sky,

He tries out the words.

They tickle his tongue.

The Per-see-ids. Those

Pinpoints of brightness

And streaks of fire,

Lighting the night

In a spectacle

Older than he can

Possibly know. . .”

~

Luanne Castle

Personally, I never thought of writing a poem about a rock, but Luanne did! Her keen awareness of nature produced “The Lizard and the Boulder,” a delightful commentary about sharing.

“Nobody remembers how the boulder

got a flat top

except the boulder. It could

have been a chisel and hammer

or when it fell from the mountain

it split into two.

***

“The lizard, stretching on

that sun-warmed surface, doesn’t think

to ask the boulder, but he

blesses her for her smoothness

and the heat that fills his veins.

He’s all alone with this rock, he believes. . .”

~

D.L. Finn

I love maple trees! – and this poem, “Hope,” reminded me of the beautiful one I played under as a small child in Indiana. The tree was so sturdy and big that it represented stability and security to me.

“under gloomy snow

a lone red maple tree stands

stunning reminder

after the darkest of nights

dawn’s rosy glow will follow”

~

Emily Gmitter

“Wounded Bird” is a sweet poem that reminds us how fragile and delicate birds can be in a predatory world. But the poem is also a metaphor for girls and women who hide their sadness and vulnerability in a cruel and unfair world.

“A solitary bird

Perched lonely and alone,

A solitary bird

No nest to call its own.

***

“A veil of sadness

Hides the plumage beneath,

Little eyes show

What it cannot speak. . .”

~

Kaye Lynne Booth

My mother loved the quaking aspen trees in Northern California, and “Aspen Tree” reminded me of her. I remember how giddy she would get when the leaves shook.

“Dark eyes staring out from white bark

Scantily clad by quivering green leaves

Turning waxy yellow in fall

Stark and exposed in winter”

~

Selma Martin

Selma’s gift for turning the ordinary into the extraordinary served her well in “Remember the Geese.” This lovely poem reminds us that aging brings pleasant memories and profound observations to pass along to the younger generation. Life is beautiful. Nature is beautiful. Getting older does not diminish our appreciation of either.

“When you turn old and your eyes droop with sleep

and your hands lay fast asleep on your lap,

look to our creek where the noon hours were long

and remember the wild geese returning

***

oh how we looked upon those brilliant creatures,

how they chose our lake to dwell. They gave us

hours of undisturbed bliss – enigmatic –

and swelled our hearts with sentimental song. . .”

~

Merril D. Smith

Birds are a glorious gift of nature, and Merril captures this well in “The Eagle.” I particularly like the first few lines.

“Energetic juvenile drops a feather,

Connecting sky and river.

She’s not yet mature, but glorious,

larger than life—

well, larger than the crows who gather. . .

~

Frank Prem

I love Frank’s dramatic description of clouds in his wonderful poem, “grey (begone).” It doesn’t get any better than this in a spooky sort of way:

“. . . the clouds

may be crawling

clawing their way

down the hills

it is evening

they creep

into the trees—”

~

Colleen Chesebro

Colleen’s poem, “The Storm,” conjures up images of weather we have all experienced, especially recently. She reminds us that silence and peace are also part of the tempest, whether in the hurricane’s eye or the profound quiet that follows the wind and rain.

“Stygian clouds, like waves in the sea, churning, boiling

White foam against a smashed pumpkin sunset

Thunder booms, echoes, and answers

Hard rain, torrents unleashing. . .”

~

Thank you for visiting!

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

May 4, 2024

Copyright 2024 Andrew McDowell, Robbie Cheadle, Patricia Furstenberg, Marcia Meara, Luanne Castle, D.L. Finn, Emily Gmitter, Kaye Lynne Booth, Selma Martin, Merril D Smith, Frank Prem, Colleen Chesebro. All Rights Reserved.

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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Lauren Scott’s Book Review of “Ariel’s Song”

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Hello!

I was pleasantly surprised this morning when poet Lauren Scott notified me that she had posted a review of my book on her website. I thank her from the bottom of my heart. I feel honored and touched by her generosity. Thank you, Lauren, for your beautiful and humbling review!

Ariel’s Song by Dawn Pisturino is a beautiful and evocative collection of sixty-five poems – a collection that she lovingly dedicates to her daughter whose name is Ariel. The poems were written over a period of three decades touching on topics of love, family, children, death, nature, and the unique. Some rhyme and others are free in their styles from traditional sonnets that invited me to contemplate, to twisted limericks that made me laugh. I had many favorites, but I’m sharing snippets from a few, otherwise, this review would turn into a novel. . .”

Please go HERE to read the rest of the review.

Thanks for stopping by! Have a great weekend!

Dawn Pisturino

May 3, 2024

Copyright 2024 Lauren Scott. All Rights Reserved.

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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Book Review: “Blue Eyes: Ethereal Messages of Connection”

Blue Eyes: Ethereal Messages of Connection by Sheila Murrey (2022). Available on Amazon.com at https://a.co/d/5UKI1Sm

The spiritual qualities of the color blue resonate throughout this book. People studying chakras and auras soon learn that blue reflects a high spiritual enlightenment radiating from the inner person. The spiritual essence, or soul, is the authentic self. When we tap into the self, we tap into the energy that animates the universe.

The spiritual self transcends the physical body. Through disciplines such as prayer, meditation, and physical movement, we expand our self-awareness and become one with the Cosmic Consciousness—or God. The more we open up and grow, the more keenly we feel the interconnectedness of all living things.

Some people with high sensitivity, called empaths, play a unique role in teaching and helping others. Their ability to receive messages from the other side and tune into the wisdom of the cosmos also makes them receptive to other people’s thoughts, emotions, and needs. It gives them the intuitive tools to connect with others and help them grow.

In this book, Sheila shares her journey of discovering her true self. From single mom to finally finding her one true love, she paints an honest and sincere portrait of her spiritual quest. We are all connected, and this book will clarify why this is so.

Website: http://www.sheilamurrey.net

Dawn Pisturino

May 3, 2024

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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The Perfect Mother’s Day Gift

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Mother’s Day is Sunday, May 12th, and books make perfect gifts!

Ariel’s Song is a collection of intensely personal poems written between 1987 and 2023 that features various styles and themes, from twisted limericks that make you laugh to traditional sonnets that make you think and feel the world around you. There is something for everyone to enjoy: dark poems, love poems, nature poems, funny poems, poems about death and grief, poems about abuse and heartache, children’s poems, and experimental poems.

Author website: http://www.dawnpisturino.org

My most active social media links:

Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/dawn.pisturino

Facebook Page: http://www.facebook.com/people/Dawn-Pisturino-author/61557762414334

Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/dawnpisturino

Pinterest: http://www.pinterest.com/dawnpisturino/

LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/dawn-pisturino-a15498123/

Medium: http://www.medium.com/@dawnpisturino

Instagram: http://www.instagram.com/dawnpisturino/

Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/WriterArizona

Reddit: http://www.reddit.com/user/Rare_Scare/

Tumblr: http://www.tumblr.com/arizonawriter

Have a great day!

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

May 2, 2024

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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Book Review: “Locker”

Locker by Michelle Ayon Navajas (2023). Available on Amazon.com at https://a.co/d/aTRPHTR.

This collection of poetic stories by Michelle Ayon Navajas touched my heart with its honesty and sincerity. She uses a school locker as a metaphor for the human heart and the feelings we lock away when a personal relationship falters due to fear, dishonesty, doubt, separation, love, friendship, longing, and frustrated desire. The stories are simple and direct, written in poetic prose that uncovers deep layers of emotion and self-reflection.

Consider this profound statement from her story, “War.”

“The greatest battle one can ever face is not war or conflict, nor is it survival or finding love. It is the battle of keeping love alive, a struggle that has been endured since the beginning of humanity.”

She writes about the unconventional side of love relationships in “Yes.”

“You captured my heart, not at ‘hello’ but at ‘goodbye.’”

“I was broken, not because you left, but because you wanted to stay. That afternoon, you pleaded for a chance and professed your love. I never gave you an honest answer.”

And pain? Yes, there is plenty of heartbreak and pain in these stories, as evidenced by her story, “Words.”

“’I’m sorry we didn’t work out.’”

“Damn, that killed me.”

I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a compelling and intriguing read.

Website: http://www.michnavs.wordpress.com

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

April 30, 2024

Copyright 2024 Michelle Ayon Navajas. All Rights Reserved.

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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Book Review: “The Life and Times of Le Bronco von der Lowenhohle”

The Life and Times of Le Bronco von der Lowenhohle by Thomas Wikman (2022 ). Available on Amazon.com at https://www.amazon.com/dp/0998084956.

I loved this book so much that I sat on the front porch one afternoon and read it in one sitting — something I wasn’t planning to do. I laughed, cried, thought about all the dogs I had ever owned, and absorbed new information about dog care. The book is written with honesty, caring, and yes, — love. Thomas Wikman loves his dogs, especially, Bronco, and that love shines throughout the book. I found it touching, heartwarming, and inspirational. He reminds us that dogs are family, too, and deserve all the love and commitment we can give. Every dog is special in its own way and enriches its owner’s life with its special quirks and talents. Bronco, to be sure, had many special talents and kept his family on its toes keeping up with him.

If you love dogs, you will love this book and all the sad and funny anecdotes. If you have never heard of the Leonberger breed, you will learn about it in this book. If you want to read more from Thomas Wikman, follow his delightful blog on WordPress.

Website: https://www.leonbergerlife.com

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

April 29, 2024

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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Poetry Book Review: “Ever So Gently”

Ever So Gently by Lauren Scott (2023). Available on Amazon.com at https://a.co/d/6VKTDPu.

Lauren Scott’s latest poetry collection reflects the inner life of the poet as she seeks to bring serenity and harmony into her world.

In “Messages from the Sea,” her verses paint a vivid portrait of nature, using keen observations and sensitive emotional reactions:

“listen intently

inhale, exhale, feel the calm

your soul will thank you”

Her signature poem, “Ever So Gently,” reminds us to leave our negative thoughts behind and enjoy the positive things around us:

“Remember, the breeze carries

burdens down rivers

and across oceans,

majestic trees sway with joy,

sheltering from shadows,

and the light shines even if only

a slight glimmer slips through”

Even when trouble rears its ugly head, Lauren embraces it with gentle grace, as described in her poem, “Diane.”

“a caring, soft force

a disciplinarian

heart teeming with love

her circle embraced the warmth

from her glimmering essence

~

“poppy-orange painted

fingernails matched her kind smile

her laugh contagious

lifting wavering spirits

always spreading elation

she blessed our marriage

twenty-four months was her time,

tendered memories

nourishing our emotions

unbeknown the grief to come

~

“time swiftly progressed

cancer penetrated her

soul, the oxygen

tank accompanied us on

that cold day in December

~

“we slid onto faux

leather, an afternoon lunch

the horizon bleak

her love flowed into my heart

strong emotions untethered

~

“fifty-nine was her

final number of candles

on her apple pie

a haunting, morning phone call

altering lives forever”

Life, love, death — all of these themes are covered in this collection of beautifully written poems. Thank you, Lauren, for sharing your heart and soul with us!

Website: www.baydreamerwrites.com

Dawn Pisturino

Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023

Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press

Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology

Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine

Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women

April 28, 2024

Copyright 2024 Lauren Scott. All Rights Reserved.

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.

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