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Lauren Scott’s Book Review of “Ariel’s Song”

on May 3, 2024

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Hello!

I was pleasantly surprised this morning when poet Lauren Scott notified me that she had posted a review of my book on her website. I thank her from the bottom of my heart. I feel honored and touched by her generosity. Thank you, Lauren, for your beautiful and humbling review!

Ariel’s Song by Dawn Pisturino is a beautiful and evocative collection of sixty-five poems – a collection that she lovingly dedicates to her daughter whose name is Ariel. The poems were written over a period of three decades touching on topics of love, family, children, death, nature, and the unique. Some rhyme and others are free in their styles from traditional sonnets that invited me to contemplate, to twisted limericks that made me laugh. I had many favorites, but I’m sharing snippets from a few, otherwise, this review would turn into a novel. . .”

Please go HERE to read the rest of the review.

Thanks for stopping by! Have a great weekend!

Dawn Pisturino

May 3, 2024

Copyright 2024 Lauren Scott. All Rights Reserved.

Copyright 2024 Dawn Pisturino. All Rights Reserved.


44 responses to “Lauren Scott’s Book Review of “Ariel’s Song”

  1. Sadje says:

    How lovely 🥰

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  2. Dear Dawn,

    Hello! Congratulations to you! I would like to inform you that I have submitted the following long comment to Lauren’s Book Review of “Ariel’s Song”. The comment is awaiting approval since it is my very first comment submitted to her blog. The comment is duplicated here since it pertains to you and your book.

    Dear Lauren, Dawn and Everybody,

    Congratulations to Dawn on the publication of her sixty-five poems in a collection entitled “Ariel’s Song“!

    We hereby welcome our fellow poet Dawn Pisturino’s poems being featured so well in an excellent blog post of Lauren Scott!

    How evocative these lines are:

    On the old stone hearth,
    And a cold wind wrapped its spectral arms
    Around the ancient wooden cottage…

    Loving Nature, I can’t help but repeat the following lines:

    When the morning comes,
    Sun will shine with a different light,
    Earth will glow in a brand-new way,
    Moon will dance to a gayer tune,
    Clouds of pain will float away.

    I would like to resonate with such an imagery in the poem pictorially as follows:

    Lauren, I would like to commend you highly for featuring Dawn’s excellent poems. We all find many aspects of her poems to be memorable, authentic, imaginative and engaging. Thank you for your impressive effort here.

    May all of you have a very happy May and a fine late springtime doing or enjoying whatever that satisfies you the most, whether aesthetically, physically, intellectually or spiritually!

    Yours sincerely,
    SoundEagle🦅

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    • Thank you very much, SoundEagle, for your wonderful comments! I appreciate them very much. And your artwork is always lovely.

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      • Dear Dawn,

        You are very welcome. Thank you very much for your heartwarming reply. Such a milestone of publishing your sixty-five poems in a collection entitled “Ariel’s Song” is not to be trivialized, unheeded or forgotten, and thus deserves a critical review from Lauren. I would hereby like to celebrate your milestone and resonate with your dedication to poetry by complementing the spirit and beauty of your poetry by inviting you to participate in the 📜 Collaborative Poetry Challenge ✍🏻 in my post metaphorically entitled “📈🌆 Growing Humanity with Artificial Intelligence: A Sociotechnological Petri Dish with Latent Threats, Existential Risks and Challenging Prospects 👨‍👩‍👦‍👦🤖🧫☣️“. The detail on how to participate in the challenge can be found in the said post published at

        📈🌆 Growing Humanity with Artificial Intelligence: A Sociotechnological Petri Dish with Latent Threats, Existential Risks and Challenging Prospects 👨‍👩‍👦‍👦🤖🧫☣️

        Overall, this post provides much more than just an avenue for some people to take up the challenge of exercising their minds and poetic flairs. It also presents a great opportunity for readers to learn something in an analytical and critical way. As a concerned citizen, farseeing thinker, former educator and (largely) retired multidisciplinary academic, I tried my best to discuss and analyse the various issues and offer some solutions, as well as posing ten critical questions about the future of humanity and artificial intelligence. After all, artificial intelligence is so ubiquitous nowadays that whether we like it or not, and regardless of the degree of our avoidance, disdain and/or apathy, our lives will be affected even in the absence of our knowledge in one way or the other.

        May you enjoy reading my said post during the weekend!

        Yours sincerely,
        SoundEagle🦅

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    • Thank you for sharing the information about your Collaborative Poetry Challenge with me and my readers. Have a wonderful day!

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  3. Thanks for reblogging, Dawn, and I’m so happy that you’re thrilled with my review. Congrats on your wonderful book!

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  4. Dawn Minott says:

    Congrats Dawn!!!! Well deserved recognition 🎉🎉🎉

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Resa says:

    I just came from Lauren’s blog to Congratulate you on your new book.

    Lauren featured a few poems and they are all wonderful.

    I HATE SNAKES made me laugh.

    Ariel is a beautiful name. I understand it is your daughter’s.

    Best wishes,

    Resa

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  6. cindy knoke says:

    So wonderful! Congratulations.

    Liked by 3 people

  7. Darryl B says:

    Wow! What a great surprise! Congrats, Dawn! 👏

    Liked by 3 people

  8. Mike U. says:

    Lauren’s amazing review has me so eager to get my mitts on a copy of your book, Dawn. I’ll be doing that in a few minutes! Congrats again on your book, and here’s wishing you much more well-deserved success in the future. 😊

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  9. Congratulations to you for getting another wonderful review, Dawn! It’s almost midnight here. I’ll try to catch up by reading Lauren’s review to morrow. 🙂

    Liked by 3 people

  10. Beautiful review Dawn !
    Wishing you continued success 🤗

    Liked by 4 people

  11. Lucy Edward says:

    Hello!
    How are you doing?

    I’d like to share some tips with you to help your book succeed.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Meelosmom says:

    Congratulations on receiving this great review of your beautiful book!

    Liked by 2 people

  13. byngnigel says:

    Lovely. I’ve read it through twice now. The funny witty ones are on my writing desk. Still gotta post my reviews. 😊👏👏

    Liked by 3 people

  14. markbierman says:

    Congratulations, Dawn!

    Liked by 2 people

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  16. balladeer says:

    This is great! Congratulations on the review!

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