I want to thank author/poet Patricia Furstenberg for her wonderful review of my first poetry book, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 -2023, on Goodreads. She is an excellent writer who has published numerous books for children and adults. To learn more about her, click on the link below:
Author of 56 books, 109 followers on Goodreads
“I enjoyed Dawn Pisturino’s poems included in her debut poetry book “Ariel’s Song” so very much!
The volume offers a diverse array of styles and themes that will definitely appeal to various readers. One will enjoy sharp limericks as well as haunting sonnets, the anthology exploring a rich spectrum of emotions but how else, Dawn Pisturino is a passionate poet. Each poem resonates with rich imagery and evocative storytelling. Readers will be happy to immerse themselves in Ariel’s world of longing and enchantment, as have I
Two poems stood out for me.
“Ariel Sings” has stood out for me as a captivating and evocative piece. The poem weaves imagery and emotion to create a sense of enchantment and longing. The portrayal of Ariel, with her lusty song and web of intrigue, draws the reader into a spellbinding narrative. The repetition of “I do not want to go” reinforces the speaker’s reluctance to leave Ariel’s enchanting presence, highlighting the power of her storytelling and song.
The imagery of Ariel folding her wings and whispering the speaker’s release is particularly poignant, conveying a sense of bittersweet farewell. Despite the longing to stay, the inevitability of parting is acknowledged, adding depth to the poem’s themes of desire and transience. The final stanza, with Ariel rising into the light and the speaker left alone in shadow, leaves a lingering impression of loss and longing.
“Sonnet to The Moon” resonated with me for its vivid imagery and evocative portrayal of the moon’s allure. The speaker’s longing for the yellow moon at the end of summer captures a sense of nostalgia and yearning for fleeting beauty. The contrast between the stars on their velvet bed and milky-white winter sets a poignant tone highlighting nature’s splendor. The autumn setting with its sweet yet pungent air adds depth to the poem’s mood, evoking a sense of melancholy and introspection. The imagery of the moon’s “big, round fulness” frozen brightly in the eastern sky and the desire to touch its silky-smooth face imbues the poem with a sense of longing and reverence. “Sonnet to The Moon” captivated me with its lyrical language and emotional resonance, reminding me to contemplate more often the beauty and beauty and uniqueness of nature’s many moments and facets.
A poetry debut volume not to be missed.”
You can visit her website at: Patricia Furstenberg
Dawn Pisturino
Author, Ariel’s Song: Published Poems, 1987 – 2023
Author of the Month for March 2024 on Spillwords Press
Co-Author, Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology
Co-Author, 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine
Co-Author, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women
Official Author Website: http://www.dawnpisturino.org
May 20, 2024
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